Wow!

This is great!

You created a whole little world in one ficlet!

holy moses, this is really good. :)
it makes me really want to know: who is coming for you?!?!?!?!

great! thanks for entering. :D
LoA

man, i feel this way, “I wonder if my supervisor can find me” lost in the work, though not as camouflaged as your character must be in grease and dust. And then the ominous THEM came. LOL ! Also, do those who leave ever make it back? Maybe its not all its cracked up to be….

by the way.
you officially won.
(hands you giant virtual holo-trophy)