interesting, disjointed, confusing and should have been marked mature.
I did however enjoy reading it.

Mature? I wasn’t really sure. There’s only one curse word, and the theme is only a little risque. I didn’t think it warranted a mature rating, but I’m new. If I get another comment about it, I’ll change it.

I just found this, and really enjoyed it. What a vivid picture you paint!

I really like how the banging into things gets explained by a combination of still being drunk and being in someone else’s apartment

Thanks Ridcully. I enjoyed this little scene quite a bit and had a good time writing it. I’m glad that you enjoyed it as well.

Cool stuff. How many times have we all been in those particular shoes? The “chew your arm off” stage of a one-night stand…

kind of confusing, but in a good way. Like there’s a huge backstory…
i think if there’d been prequels to this, though, it might’ve ruined this story. It stands well on its own

Haha, very funny stuff. Great description of the “walk of shame” as the “sprint of shame”.