I liked the rhythm of this, it makes it feel as though it was written years and years ago. I’m not normally one for rhyme schemes, but this works nicely. Great work!
LoA

Loved the rhymes, the rhythms were good once I read them correctly. Funny. How is it that you and I are always writing about similar love situations? I just posted a poem, so I’m not going to sequel with it like I usually do.

Ooh, that was lovely. It’s certainly a romantic theme, fighting to save the one you love from their own folly.

love it. you were always good at writing. this just proves it even more so. =) defending your love from someone unseemingly harmful. so romantic and strong with passion. like i said, i love it.