Great continuation. I think you’ve captured perfectly the mood of complacency and drudgery that Browncoatben had suggested in his piece, the symptom of years without conflict or action. Very telling that we’re just now wondering after their being 17 hours late. Nice touch and great ficlet.

Nicely done. You really captured the mood, like THX said. I appreciate the sequel…very flattering!

Thanks mate, I’m happy to hear you liked it.