Enjoyable read with a nice little twist at the end. I thought it took a while to get to the punchline at the end, but it flowed naturally and set the scene very well.
@John Perkins: Thanks for the input. I think this 1,024 limit is going to take some real getting used to. It’s difficult to come up with something decent only to have to pair it down and not lose the things that make it interesting. Need to continue working on that for sure.
I know what you mean. I’ve tried doing a couple and they haven’t turned out as well as I had hoped. I create them in MS Word and end up 100 characters over, then have to pare it down to fit.
I’m going to try and do a decent sequel to this continuing Ridcully’s original. Hopefully it will work well and fit into the story you guys have crafted.
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