Love it! A great continuation on the story.
Nice way of inserting a bit of humanity into our protagonist.
I like how you ended it. The wide open door would put the fear of God into a new father, if he happened to work for an evil corporation. And I agree with pyropunk and his comment upon inserting a bit of humanity into the protagonist.
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