Nice one. I really like the sense of menace that you have added very neatly, both externally and internally to our character. Great work!

I really like the direction you guys have taken this story. This sort of collaboration is exactly what I was looking forward to in joining Ficlets.

I think maintaining different styles on a “fun” piece like this one benefits the entire work so I put together a sequel with a bit of the tone I used. We all have a different voice in telling this tale and I think it’s working out great.

Keep up the good work fellas!

Enjoying this a lot. Loving the sinister edge to the corporations that you’re giving. Keep it up!

I enjoyed that. Sinister mega corporation successfully added to the story!

That’s a downright menacing tape. The line about the lack of compensation package and its aftermath especially. You turned up the dial, now I’m ready to tune in to the rest of this series!