I liked the unmentioned swears added after the ‘no’. Not quite sure I get why Chris got him, other than to pester him cause he can. But still an endearing interaction between the two, in a tough guy sort of way, of course.
Sequel finally done, and guess what. I actually like it! Couldn’t resist the little set-up you left (intentionally or not) at the end of this one…just seemed to fit the character. Hope the interminable waits aren’t getting to ya’ too much.
THX 0477
THX 0477
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