nice sequel, it was a good idea to answer all the factors they had in the prequel in this sequel and answer it with a saying, very creative.good job, overall.=]
Thanks :) I just realised that the middle part read very differently from my intention, so I’ve re-phrased it a little.
i like how you say some say and they say, adds a certain element to the almost poetic feel.
One Time, One Chance
Lee Braiden
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