A real smile spread across her face, lighting her green eyes and making her freckles jump. Great line. I love the idea of the smile making her freckles jump. Poor guy.
Ouch. That’s what he gets for waiting until the last minute. Very playful exchange, perhaps hinting that she knows more about what’s going on than is readily apparent.
that stinks a lot. Yeah, he should of asked her earlier. I like how you give some kind of moral, you never know what you have till it is gone. Thanks again for entering. LoA
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