I’m glad you put the mature tag on this because I could feel my eyebrows inching higher and higher as I read this. Just messing with you, the language actually helps characterize Jeremy and give insight into what’s going on in his life.

The last line is killer. Cockroach fucker? Funny.

That was some intense and yet incredibly colorful use of language. I agree with Both Ana and John, it’s great for characterization and laughs.