kind of depressing tale. Though it’s not explained I feel like she missed a whole day just watching tv and then suddenly it was wednesday. I liked the descriptions in this story, nothing much really happens except a small freak out, but it’s told well. lol

It suffers from the format. The idea is that she woke up after Yesterday Girl left her body. So she missed out on a whole day. It was hard to get across that idea plus everything else I was going for in such a short period. It’s something I hope to work on as I write more ficlets. And hopefully expand on this idea.
Thank you for the feedback.