a rewrite of an older ficlet… wanted to move it into this series, etc.

I enjoyed this. It reminded me of my favorite book, 1984, by George Orwell. The concept of Totalitarism via corporation is a frightening possibility and you’re conveying the individual’s perspective well.

very desperate existence described quite. I like the whole duality and facade.

Nice, I was going to look into that old sequel, but now I don’t have to! It is a good start and explains more.
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Great job! Absolutely loving this! Even in its darkness. Dark is good in this prescribed dosage. ;)