Sorry, I couldn’t resist.

That was even worse than the prequel.

You’ll get no argument from me.

disgusting, but funny in a south park kind of way. I think that before you write anything you should mark it mature just in case. I liked the description of how his voice cracked. I almost threw up at the chunk of corn part.

Oh you! Ha – funny, yet disturbing…

Oh, so this is the Mr. Hankey sequel someone mentioned. I missed it until now. I thought it was impressive how you maintained the serious tone of the other ficlets while introducing something as silly as the talking poo from South Park.