reminds me a bit of dr. Who, but still a neat dynamic.

Thanks again THX for the honest critique, as always, most appreciated.

Now that you mention it, there is a bit of a Dr. Who feel… no exactly what I was going for but I’ll see where it leads me.

Good piece…sets a tone…I’ve seen Dr. Who here and there, but not a lot. So, no comment on any parallels that may be there.

Either way, I really like the mood of suspicious, curious awe I get from Dreanna.

Quick note…mispelled traveling in the first line.

Nice catch on the misspelling Browncoatben!
On a side note, another friend said she saw the Q from Star Trek in these stories.
As usual, thanks for the feedback.

Really intriguing feeling to the whole thing, I dig it.

I love the ending and wonder what He’s hiding.