Well-described moment. Bit of a twist there with someone else in the car (?). Tragic and kind of romantic maybe.

Having been in one very serious car crash, I can say that you REALLY captured the moment.

You start “super processing” during the event and time honestly slows down to the point where seconds feel like minutes.

Great work!

I agree with KM, having been in a serious car crash as well. Very well described. Sad that the shred of happiness is locked into the thought of not surviving. Makes you wonder about the other person in the car.

i love this. I’ve never been in a (serious) car crash, but this is beautiful and sad and it made me cry. Thank you so much.

wow.. I like how you describe the horror of knowing you wouldnt survive the crash. Also the car spinning out of control and its last revolution being against your car. Incredible. You have captured this horrific situation right down to the nano seconds that its made of . The ending is tragic but expected. Job well done!