I was inspired by one of the ending lines that Ficlets provides. It’s been hard to write lately, sometimes what I write works and sometimes it doesn’t. g I’m currently reading Dante’s Inferno through the DailyLit site, we’ll see what that inspires as well.
Dante’s Inferno is excellent, and immensly creepy-cool. The 9th layer of hell is the coolest description I’ve probably ever read. Your story was very visible to me, I could picture clearly where they were and what they were doing, so in that sense it’s a victory. And yes, I think you can write.
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