Holy crap! Getting right into the action I see. Good set up here for something crazy to happen.
I like the backstory that you threw in there making Phil former military. Kind of takes him from being Dilbert to MacGyver though. Especially being first out of the chopper. I’ll have to ponder this for a few hours.

Ooo, nano… love it.

Very well written. Like the background bio on our hero.

Heck of a raid. Very terrorizing to see what you’re up against.