I like this story. It’s told very well and could provide for some very intriguing prequels and sequels. If I were a more competent ficleter I might even post one. As it stands I would hate to sully what you have crafted. Oh, and I got no ideas. =P
this sorta reminds me of the satrical movie Dogma.. I don’t exactly know why.. Perhaps its the tone of voice in the main character. Definately a fun read..
I really like it. Oh it kind of fits into the theme of a series of ficlets that I’m working on, starting with “God is in the TV” from my list. BTW , your is way more comedic… that’s a good thing :)
Great visual, the idea of mom and son (late teens or grown, I guess) having a little talk in the kitchen about his being deity. Didn’t quite follow the last line, but maybe I’m not up to speed today.
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