Glad to see you posting another ficlet on this instead of taking the whole thing offline. I’ve been enjoying this storyline.

Thanks, Kev – as long as people want to read it, I can keep posting the series… Thanks for the feedback!

Hard to resist the allure of instant feedback, isn’t it? I like the additional weakness/anxiety (?) from Aslog, the whole, “You will not make me look bad,” shows just how tenuous her position really is despite how imposing and frightening she is to those below her.

ooo, interesting. I like the you will not make me look bad. Like it is all on her instead of him.
LoA