Damn! You got some suspense going here. I love it.
Typo in second paragraph says “horse neck door” rather than “next.” My only other criticism is that it takes too long to get the sequels to this series.

Thanks for pointing out the typo, John. Fixed.

Dude, come on. It’s been like 2 days already. I’m jonesing to find the fate of Roland and Jacque. =D

‘Don’t expect to get back this way.’ That line has me excited about the journey to come.