This is a great use of the song. I absolutely love that you gave him different colored eyes, and the dog mannerism of turning his head. Very well written psycho you got here. . It reminds me of the first website I created back in 96 that was the journal entries of 6 different inmates in a psych ward. Your ficlet reminded me of that, and how it may work as a series here. Thank you for the inspiration.
Jenunique
I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!
John Perkins
martha