Lovely imagery. Can’t wait for pretty things to continue.

Though destined to never be local, no that took generations in a Southern town, he had become a part of the town. Great detail and accurate detail. Something about Cole has me uneasy.

well crafted story here. Great opening paragraph. Your talent is showing in this one.

I like it! I’m glad I didn’t ruin your flow – I had intended my piece as a sidebar, not a direct sequel.