As many people have stated on your various Ficlets, you write imagery beautifully. This was a wonderfully described scene.

WOW . Gave me goosebumps. I wonder how long it will be before he is found? 23 years?

Amazing as always! Can’t get better imagery than that.
LoA

A shirt as pale and worn as his skin clings about him< imagery is as about as descriptive as can be,always inpressed with your range of writing.

“The setting sun sends its fingers…”—amazing. It’s going to be really, really, tough to top this effort, THX .

Beautiful!

This was stunning. It conveyed so much in such a small space. It’s hard to pick a favorite line, but this one comes mighty close: _A shirt as pale and worn as his skin clings about him, stuck to skin which is stuck to bone, all damp with the perspiration of a fervent summer day. _

Geez, this is good; this was touching, definately felt the heartstrings tighten a bit. I don’t see how you couldn’t paint that and hang it in a gallery somewhere. You never have failed to disappoint.