The way you wrote the camera parts really gets across the erratic feeling of the scene, I could picture the entire thing. Really, really, neat.
Great stuff! Love this perspective!
I agree with JM here. You really get the sense of chaos here.
Ditto their comments. As always, flawless pacing.
hey i dont like the camera drones that puts the ‘safety last’ photographers like myself out of work
This is some intense stuff. Ditto on the pacing and the well-described camera portions. You can just see it in your mind.
Thanks guys/gals. I really enjoyed writing this piece as well, especially loved this perspective. So much, in fact, that I use it again later on in the series.
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