Senseless brutality. Violence. Cursing. And a bad/good guy named Benny.

Great series, man.

Are knockers a cyberpunk mainstay? I’m not all that familiar with the genre, so I’m not sure what a knocker is. Would that be a gang term?

Nothing Cyberpunk, no, just my own twist. The police force in my cyberpunk New Orleans is called the New Orleans Civil Authority…N.O.C.A. for an acronym, Knocker would be the derogatory gang-term towards the police. Was gonna explain that later on, but this works :)

Ah, ok. I just wasn’t sure if it’s something that I would have picked up if I read more William Gibson or something. That explains it.

I believe the word voice-over requires a hyphen, but I’m not entirely sure on that. It looks like it would.
Another great installment.

Hmm, interesting note there, Ana. I’m not sure how that would read…I think that, maybe… “a male voice, over the…” would explain the sentence better, but doesn’t look good because it places an unnecessary pause. Here we go…”over” is operating as an adjective. “voice-over” would be a noun.

go ahead jlaughter with your bad self, i like to say a computer could write a million words without an error but it couldn’t write the glass menagerie

Thanks Trif…I think. If I can be honest, most of your comments have confused me! :)

I’m glad John asked about the Knockers because I was scratching my head too. Great inventive slang there. This series is fantastic.

I’m glad John asked about the Knockers because I was scratching my head too. Great inventive slang there. This series is fantastic.