Not entirely happy with this, but I think it moves the story along. Hopefully it gives Steve something good to work with.

Wow, very exciting. Great job keeping details flowing in the middle of a tense situation. Classic action/thriller stuff.

I like! Echoing THX , you have done a really good job here of combining the narrative flow with good details from previous episodes – that bit about the login fits in with the action perfectly.

The whole login thing fit the ‘traitor’ scenario so perfectly I’m starting to wonder about Jen maybe being a double-agent of sorts.