Very exciting situation and a lot jam-packed in there, so it winds up a little bare-bones on description. Still, it’d serve as a nice jump off point for a spy or action type story.

I thought this had a very Bonnie and Clyde mixed with River Tam fighting the Reavers( scene from the movie ‘Serenity’) feel to it .

The name Cheshire became a speedbump in the story for me. Everytime I read his name, it threw me off. Sometimes unique names need to be explained.

Also “hear the roar of engines” implied multiple cars, and when only one car showed up, I had to go back and re-read to make sure.

3 bad guys, with 2 kills explained was another hickup in the story for me

Great story! And the last line… priceless.

Just clearing this up a bit: Most of these stories are cut-down and bare-bones versions of prompts from when Harlequin Requiem was very young, so I know they’re very rough sometimes. I apologize for this and will attempt to fix the errors made eventually.
Cheshire’s name is explained (VERY roughly) in Smirk and Smile (about 3 years old and the first time I even considered her character).