I love the line: “I think we’ll take the stairs today, Toto.” Great tense scene.

I really love the tension; you could cut it like a knife…
I, now, feel compelled to read the prequels!

clicks “POST COMMENT ” & goes back in ‘ficlet’ time

One word came to mind when I read this…

“daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang!”

You can quote me on that. Few flicets have drawn me in as much as this one did, plus I learned a new word today: tableau

Yes, very nice use of tableau, and I love the added detail of the lady with her dog. A great touch of grounding to a really out-there series.

Hm one reason she should stay? Uh, hello, you’ve got a hookup with a guy with magical powers… I WOULD BE STAYING !!!!
… but maybe that’s just because I’m weird. :) lol.
Great job.

“Give me one good reason I should stay.â€?
Becaaaause……
Im awesome!!!!!!!!!!! xD
More please

sequelled.

the little old lady’s quip made me laugh