Pretty interesting continuation. Let’s see if I can beat John to the editing. You need to fix ”…nothing but a bad dream…” and “How do you tell someone they died?” Great stuff. Keep it up!

Good setup here. I like how you described his reaction to her touch.
So I guess Kaellinn gets my editor’s fee for this one? =P

Thanks guys, this one suffered from me rushing it into the computer before I darted out the door on my way home from work. I should have saved it as a draft. :)