Man, you’re on a roll! Yay!!!

a beseeching look in her crystalline irises..
I love that line!! writes that down in note book for future inspiration
Thank you.

Crushed and alone, how sad. I can see how she’d be jealous. Great writing, as usual.

Ooh, I’d forgotten all about the rose! Great detail and metaphor and writing and stuff…and junk. Being a manly man, I won’t admit to this in public, but this is one heck of a great series…all romantical or not. So there.

blinks at THX Manly man?
Just kidding.
I love this, and it is totally understandable that she’s jealous. It’s easy to imagine the tension making her crush the rose in her fist. Great job!

Oh wow…I can’t say anything other than I’ll be definitely keeping a hawk’s eye on this series. Keep up the excellent work!

LOL @ your comment, Dreamer.
And thanks for your compliments, guys! I’m glad you’re enjoying our little series. I finally got some inspiration. Let’s see if we can keep this going.

Can’t believe I missed Dreamer’s comment. Is she casting aspersions on my manliness?

love this story.. this series looks very intriguing. I have caught it in the middle so I will need to catch up..

You can start from the beginning, Sarah:
ficlets.com/stories/28741

haha THX . Perhaps.

my lord, i just started this series from the beginning and its quite captivating.

Thank you, AR. :)