“It’s been three days since I’ve talked to him last, and now I realize that was probably the last time that I am going talk to him in quite a while.”
I like the “three days” part. Mesmerizing and descriptive. I think you should take lines like this from your work and expand them in your other work. Leave out the adjectives & adverbs while paying mind to the details. Nicely done.
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