Lovely in a sterile, weightless sort of way, well suited to the subject matter.

I love how the wording really matches the setting. It’s very technical and scientific. It helps the reader really inhabit the world you’ve created.
(And doesn’t THX write the best comments? Just thought I should mention that.)

Ok i understand the whole space thing but i wish you had went more with beautiful descriptive narrative of the first one. And you have to keep in mind that ficlets are not just a page they are a chapter like a minisode . so it has to begin and end like a chapter. With that being said i love how you ended on the experiment thing you gave just enough info to really wish i knew what the experiment was
and the spacing between the paragraphs somehow made me feel like i was floating or distracted either way good