Amusing concept. Keep it going.
LoA

I think Walmart security didn’t like you bringing a TJ Max umbrella in their store. :P

Nice balance between dialog, action, and inner thought process. The few little grammar things are a bit distracting, but that’s fixable.

Very cool and action packed. and funny.

Very cool and action packed. and funny.

Very cool and action packed. and funny.

Muscle memory! I like the purple umbrella, nice touch!