WOW ! So I see you did work “Corporal Blake” into your evil plans. :)
Perfect balance on the conversations here. Great flow.

I dig it! Great stuff! I’ll jump in some other time, you keep it up!

I’m really proud of the last line…really got me excited when I wrote it.

Thanks guys!

Loved the line about not being alone cause it’s against regs, like that’s really the thing to be concerned about. But that’s how the mind works sometimes.

That was a great and very telling final line.