Wonderfully entertaining, of course. With an ending that I should have known would be a surprise coming from you. ;D Great job, again.

I read this on the bus and it made me laugh out loud. Rather embarrassing, but totally worth it.
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And when the cops come, the victims can tell them it was Thomas Edwin Jameson’s mother. How hard can it be to find her? ;)
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That was absolutely brilliant! I laughed out loud. Great ending.

Hahaha, wb! That was hilarious! I loved the ending! uhuh, Get the hell back down. my turn. lol
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Like mother like son,unexpected and funny ending.. lots of cussing.. not a fan, but o well.. still funny.

hahahah, i love the ending. :)
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Kermitgorf: Yeah, unusual for me, I know. I tried writing it a little more… I don’t know… “family friendly”, I guess. But no matter what I tried, it just didn’t read right to me.