This is not going to end…um, or begin well.

“[O]ne of the forensic unit,” sounds off to me. Is this a language barrier thing, or a typo?
I think I might actually be following what’s going on. Huh. That’s odd since I can barely follow large, yellow roads paved in brick.

Yeah, the line felt really off to me as well, I couldn’t think of what to add to make it better… in retrospect maybe ”…to one of the forensic unit working inside.”

LOL at THX ’s comment. This keeps getting better!
You have one minor error in your third paragraph, first line. The word “its,” when used as a possessive pronoun, does not require the apostrophe. You only need it when making the contraction for “it is.”
OK, grammar lesson over. Back to your regularly scheduled program. ;-)
LoA

I love grammar lessons, fixed the misplaced contraction. Thanks for the tip!