i like this a lot. we all have our things that we hide and she is starting to see the things that he hides
Very dreamlike and disorienting but full of emotion. Not sure if you meant to, but the changes in tense were very distracting.
ooooo wow that was very interesting. i liked the end. i mean it was sad but it’s real ya know?
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