dun dun duuuunnn. lol. Firstly, congrats on publishing your book and your success as a writer. Much respect. And hopefully much more to come. This story is certainly well crafted and leading to something evil and spooky. I’ve added you in my contacts and hope to read more of your work in the future.

Great opening. Really caught me somehow right at the beginning. The ending wasn’t as powerful as I was expecting, but that may be because I’m not Catholic.