O wow. NIce tension!!!!!!!!! And I get it!!! YAAAAY !!! GOLD STAR !!! sorry… X)
whoa! that was amazing, and it all makes perfect sense!!!
Ouch, brutal ending, though it wound up kind of quick. Still, a fun scenario.
This was an awesome story, made even better with the sequence of events. Devastating in some parts, funny mostly throughout, overall one of your better stories. Well done!LoA
Man, you guys take baseball waaaay too seriously. ;-)
Sailor Emo
Nissakit
THX 0477
♠Ana Cristina♥
Trann