Beautifully written.

I really like this, so mysterious. Great sense of foreboding here. I have added on to the series. Hope you like it.

Eerie and very ‘in the moment’ but with plenty of suggested details outside the frame of the ficlet. Great feel to it all as well.

i feel like i am being tricked because i dint really learn anything substantial but i cant keep from reading the next one its like i ficlitized