The title doesnt make sense, but I just wanted to make it match with the prequel. I hope this captured a sort of hind-sight feeling from the 1st one.
The title sort of makes sense, because the person is saying hello to a new life or whatever. Nicely written. You did a great job here.
frankly i like the sequel more that the prequel :)
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