Neat job kind of winding up the tension between the characters. The hand reaching meant to hint at a different kind of relationship between the women?

Yep – read the next ficlet & you’ll see. This crazy story is part of a larger short story I’m trying to wrap up… : ) Your feedback is always of use.

Interesting, with a lez couple in the mix. Good sequel, I have a feeling this wont be a happy ending though.
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I love how Steve is oblivious to the fact that the girls are not interested in him. The detail THX mentioned was a subtle way of developing their history. Well done.