Feel free to use capitalization, and proofread. The constructs of grammar and spelling exist to be more an an annoyance; they can add depth and color to your writing.

I suggest you approach Ficlets as you would a traditional publisher. You have a very creative mind but it’s wasted when your words come out jumbled and unreadable. Some effort in this area will make reading your work much more enjoyable.

Just some constructive criticism. I think you can blossom. Please don’t take it the wrong way.

ditto (look @ the 1st comment)

Yeah, I do agree with uselessness, but, I thought it was a cliffhanger at the end because i did make out the words.