nice start! Gossip sucks, I don’t get why people send rumors if they don’t like hearing about rumors about them selves. This is going to be some interesting series.
LoA

sometimes the dialogue seems unnatural. Just look out for that and a few grammar mistakes. Otherwise though, its a great idea.

I tried editing it!

nice work. I could hear these two converse in my head. Its true to life.. I can remember being that age, having a fight similar to this with one of my friends at the time.

hmmm. i smell a serious fight brewing.

Hmmm, sounds like someone I know who had a fight….

I like it.

I like how you jumped right into the action. It grabbed my attention from the start.