Gordo is turning out to be every bit the monster I imagined he could be… with the pinching and caressing… sullen vengeance for a lifetime of perceived wrongs.

Great stuff, Gordo being so light hearted amongst the horror of the scene is off putting and makes him scarier.

You have an extra ‘p’ in septic, by the way.

James Patterson has met his rival. as good as any of the Alex cross novels.

Ah, so Gordo is working with someone? Interesting indeed.

This one just shows even more how much of a creep Gordo is. It makes a shiver go down my spine in discust at him. You did an excellent job, yet again. You are truly a master ficleteer.

ah yes another enjoyable read from the master himself