Good job of going through his emotions. Well told.
You put a space between the underscore and the “I” in the fifth paragraph, so it did not italicize.

Thanks John, sometimes it’s hard to “see” a space when it falls at the end of the line you are editing.

Interesting that Ker noticed Dreanna’s absence before Eric. Is it chalked up to his limited abilities on the planet? or am I reading too much into it?

Good point betweenspace. I didn’t even think of that part, but I’m sure it’s just another thing to make Eric all pissy.

@thebetweenspace – Give that man a prize! I was wondering when someone would catch that point… BTW you are exactly right, Eric’s abilities are diminished here.