I love it! Great little piece of writing. I added a prequel to put a bit of a spin on it.
LoA

It’s maybe a little bit short, but I really like it!

Thanks y’all! I appreciate the feedback. It was a bit short to start, but after I read it a couple of times I thought it would get wheels turning. :)

Haha!

That is pretty cool.

I can just imagine her, sitting there, are suspicious and secretive.

Great job.