What a great last line! Kind of educational for Prandi. I love the whole clarification of jilt.

Well he is teaching her a weird american lesson! It would be fun to see her try and use that one day. Great sequel! =]

That is a weird American lesson. I wonder if she will ever use it…

=] Great job…

Very funny interaction there as Prandi tries to figure out why her lab time has been so disrupted. Maybe a little uneven that Jameson is for a whole paragraph not sorry but then is shaken up. Not exactly the same thing, but it seems like one would be linked to the other.

Good point, THX . I adjusted it a bit. Let me know if it helps.

I like how you compared Prandi to an owl.. thats pretty cool.. Very inventive. Good banter here. Good work!

Prandi may be my new favorite character.