Amazing imagery, and a novel description of a post-war/bomb/revolution world.

Conjured images of an “Escape from New York”-like post-apocalyptic world. Well written.
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Dark and lots of well thought out detail with a gravely voice-over sort of feel to it. Didn’t quite follow the second-to-last sentence though.

looks like this is someones idea of the worlds end. I would hope we have a far brighter future than that.

Good job. A very sad kind of future, but who knows what the future may hold. I just hope if that happens in our lifetime, that I am not one of the ‘sick’ genes.
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dark indeed, aworld I wouldnt want to be alive it, you paint a vivid picture of a future.. sci fi style.

yes, dark but a definite possibility all the same